This is my final update for the pre-production of my short, I have got all my character designs, environments scripts and everything else worked out. Have a look see into this amazing mind of mine :P
script
Abagail
(brings joy)
By Alana Williamson
Script v 2
EXT. MAIN STREET, REAL LIFE -- DAY
Street full of silhouettes of people walking down the
street.
Abagail in bright clothes and rainbow socks as she is walking
along the street as silhouette pass her by.
ABAGAIL
(CHIRPY)
Dah, dah, dah dah dah.
Abagail has a bright smile on her face happy. Looking oblivious to her surroundings. She walks with
a light bounce in her step as she hums.
In the reflection of her eyes you can see the bright
reflection of something she is seeing.
CAMERA SWIVELS AROUND TO REVEAL:
EXT. MAIN SREET, ABAGAIL’S IMAGINATION – DAY
There are bouncing houses and sunflowers as she continues
her traveling down the street. There seems to be less people around or none.
ABAGAIL (CONT’D)
Abagail continues her walk down the street. Her pigtails
bouncing.
Abagail looks towards some sunflowers that lay in a flower
bed. The sunflowers look up gleaming at her.
FLOWERS
Boing boing boing
A house slightly warps to reveal a small smile.
Abagail Continues her journey along the road.
MONSTER (DOG)
Growllll!!! Yip!!!
Abagail hears a noise from a dark alleyway.
She stops and listens to the growling noise, growing
increasingly more nervous.
MONSTER (DOG)
(GAINING IN VOLUME)
Growwwllll Yip!!!
A shadow appears on the wall in front of Abagail. Abagail
looks at the shadow shocked and unable to move.
The shadow gets bigger on the wall.
MONSTER (DOG)
(ALMOST A SHOUT)
Growwwlll!!!! Yiiiipppp!!
The noise echoes as it comes out of the alleyway.
Abagail finding the sudden strength to move runs in the
other direction away from the alleyway.
The shadow on the wall disappears and from out of the alleyway appears a cute
little poodle.
MONSTER (DOG)
Yip!!! Yip!!!!
The monster (dog) smiles as Abagail runs further off into
the distance.
CUTS TO:
EXT. SCHOOL PLAYGROUND – DAY
Abagail runs down the street running past the school gates
to a pole.
Out of breath Abagail collapses on a pole
ABAGAIL
(PANTING)
Puff puff.
Abagail finally gets the strength to pull herself off the
pole. Her cheeks flushed from the running, she pans the school playground.
Abagail spots tow kids a girl and a boy, her friends talking
next to the play equipment.
Abagail runs up to the two children. Falling on top of the
girl, she stops to catch her breath.
ABAGAIL
(PANTING)
Puff puff puff.
Abagail starts to tell her story of the monster to the two
kids. Getting really animated and wide eyed she shows them about the almighty
big monster.
ABAGAIL
(GRUFF)
Grooowwwwllll!!!
Abagail’s friend both turn to look at each other. They both
start to smirk at each other until neither of them can hold it in any longer.
The friends both burst out in laughter at Abagail.
Abagail gets angry about her friends laughing at her so she
stomps off. Her friends start making fun of her as she leaves. As Abagail stomps of she starts to cry just a
little. Then she get sad.
FADE OF COLOUR, CUT TO:
EXT. MAIN STREET, REAL LIFE – DAY
Abagail walks up the main street again. This time it’s full
of all the people again. They are like blurs to her. One of the people in a
hurry knocks Abagail over and she falls to the ground.
Abagail starts to cry, she has given up hope.
A tear falls from Abagail’s eye, it hits the ground and this
monster appears.
Abagail oblivious to the little pocket sized monster
continues to cry. The monster happily walks over to Abagail’s hand and touches
his little paw on it. Abagail looks around, looking for a person, but doesn’t
see any one.
Abagail looks down and see the little monster gleaming up at
her a big goofy smile on his face. Abagail picks him up with her two fingers
and holds him in her hand up to her face.
She smiles at the little monster and cuddles him into her
chest. Abagail, then pulls him up to her
face and he hugs her cheek.
CUT TO:
INT. LOUNGE ROOM --
DAY
Abagail and the monster have a little tea part together. The
monster is way to small for the chair though. The monster beams up at Abagail.
CUT TO:
EXT: MAIN STREET, REAL LIFE -- DAY
Abagail is walking down the street with the little monster
sitting on her shoulder.
CUT TO
EXT: GRASSY FIELD
Abagail is looking for the monster as he hides in the bushes
giggling.
The monster surrenders to Abagail’s mighty blade (a pin).
Abagail and the monster lay in the grass after a fun filled
day both resting under a tree and looking up at the sky. They are both smiling
and pointing to the clouds.
A dark shadow appears above them and Abagail shots off. The
monster then falls to the ground in the grass.
There is a dark shadow above them. It’s of a boy.
The boy smiles down at Abagail and holds out his hand for
her. She grabs it and he oulls her up out of the grass. Abagail, smiles back at
the boy. The boy lead Abagail away.
The monster still in the grass smiles as Abagail and the boy
walk off together. Abagail turns back and looks at the little monster and
smiles at him as she walks away.
The monster not moving from his spot still continues to
smile. Slowly she starts to fall over till his head hits the ground. It reveals
the tag attached to his bottom :MADE IN CHINA .
Fin
Storyboarding
Character concepts
Background concepts
I even finished the building for the reality.
Mood boards
pre-viz
Moving forward and up
Animatornerd
awesome ^^ =P it looks good =D
ReplyDeleteI'm excited too, Alana! Did you manage to get any more done during the break?
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